tag:dreamwidth.org,2012-01-25:1453509 a pedantic killjoy with a sociopathetic abscess Barbayat 2012-11-16T15:59:25Z tag:dreamwidth.org,2012-01-25:1453509:3288 2012-11-16T02:01:18Z 2012-11-16T15:59:25Z awake public 0 <b>Fandom:</b> ......................... Captain America (the new one)<br /><b>Characters/Pairings:</b> .... Johann Schmidt/OFC<br /><b>Rating & Warnings:</b> ...... non-con, torture<br /><b>Notes:</b> ..................... this is not a romance fanfic, I am not even sure if porn with out plot is a an acurate label, it focuses on this unhealthy dynamic between the OFC (French Underground member) after getting on Schmidt's wrong side.<br />I really like to get it done by xmas. So far I am in 3000+ words. I need advice on pacing, maybe some feedback on how well I present the dynamics and grammar.<br /><br /><span class="cut-wrapper"><span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___1" class="cuttag"></span><b class="cut-open">(&nbsp;</b><b class="cut-text"><a href="https://barbayat.dreamwidth.org/3288.html#cutid1">few snippets for you from the first 3000 words</a></b><b class="cut-close">&nbsp;)</b></span><div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___1" aria-live="assertive"></div><br /><br /><img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=barbayat&ditemid=3288" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/> comments