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Looking for a Beta for a Red Skull non-con pwp
Fandom: ......................... Captain America (the new one)
Characters/Pairings: .... Johann Schmidt/OFC
Rating & Warnings: ...... non-con, torture
Notes: ..................... this is not a romance fanfic, I am not even sure if porn with out plot is a an acurate label, it focuses on this unhealthy dynamic between the OFC (French Underground member) after getting on Schmidt's wrong side.
I really like to get it done by xmas. So far I am in 3000+ words. I need advice on pacing, maybe some feedback on how well I present the dynamics and grammar.
( few snippets for you from the first 3000 words )
Characters/Pairings: .... Johann Schmidt/OFC
Rating & Warnings: ...... non-con, torture
Notes: ..................... this is not a romance fanfic, I am not even sure if porn with out plot is a an acurate label, it focuses on this unhealthy dynamic between the OFC (French Underground member) after getting on Schmidt's wrong side.
I really like to get it done by xmas. So far I am in 3000+ words. I need advice on pacing, maybe some feedback on how well I present the dynamics and grammar.
( few snippets for you from the first 3000 words )